yup, looks good! i can't think of a way to change it. well, i can think of 1000 ways to change it, but none of them would necessarily make a better beer. looks like you've got all your bases covered. i'm guessing you have mostly maris otter, and then some US 2row is because you don't have enough MO on hand? totally legit to do that! i love victory malt in a pale too, btw.