My take is that the toasted malt is a bit over the top. Use a little if you like, 1/2 to 3/4 lb might be nice, but at 24% the 3 lbs is just too much IMO. There is really no need to gild the lily here, the MO pale will hold up fine by itself in this beer. For hops, as much as I love Spalt, the EKG would be a better choice and certainly very traditional. Also on the hop topic I would boost the IBUs a bit to the low 40s to keep up with that 1.058 OG. The beer will still showcase the malt but have better balance. I would also consider using a traditional British hop schedule with one bittering addition at 90 minutes and one flavor/aroma at 15 minutes. After messing around with all kinds of hopping schedules for bitters and ESB I have gone back to the old Brit practice and think it does work the best for the style.
