30% cara/crystal malt is way too much (especially in a big beer). The problem with big beers is to get them to dry out enough to be balanced. I'd just swap out the carafoam for 4 more lbs of pale. Hold off on the lactose until bottling, at that point you can add it to taste (Irish ale is a low attenuator, so you may have enough sweetness as is).
I would give it a bit more hop bitterness, 18 IBUs isn't much for such a big beer, I'd say ~30 minimum.
I really like cocoa powder for chocolate flavor, it is low on cocoa butter so it doesn't cause the same fat related issues that other types of chocolate pose. I mix it with some hot water and add it to secondary.
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