it will make a fine beer as is, but I think you have enough roasted barley to push it more into stout/porter territory (unless you have the 300 L stuff from Briess). I'd probably back down the roasted barley and up the chocolate.
I like less crystal malt, but then I don't want my beers to have much sweetness.
Otherwise looks solid, hope it turns out well.
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