Wish I knew what program you're using; the paste is wicked weird.
I think your BU:GU ratio is a bit low. I prefer a target of 0.5 for Brown Ales. Your 0.39 is closer to Bock than Brown Ale. But that's your taste.
Your grist is way too complicated.
First, that much Honey Malt stands an excellent chance of overpowering the flavor.
Second, you don't need CaraPils; if the other grist ingredients don't provide enough body and foam retention - and they will - use mash techniques for those purposes. Skill, not ingredients.
Third, that much Victory is teetering on the brink of excessive. If you insist on using that much,
definitely increase the bittering addition to bring your BU:GU ratio to as close to 0.5 - probably better to go as high as 0.7 - as you can.
Good luck to you!
Bob